You Had Me at the First Line: College Essay Hooks
As early decision and early action colleges begin to release decisions, The Razor asked the Class of 2023 to share the first sentence of their personal statement, a 650-word essay that gets sent to all the schools they apply to through the Common App. Here are some of their actual college essay hooks:
“My name is five letters, all of which my two younger sisters have stolen, taking sibling rivalry to the next level.”
-Aanya Panyadahundi
“I couldn’t quite spell my full name until I was eight years old.”
-Dani Rodriguez-Larrain
“Freshman year, I entered high school with boundless energy and excitement.”
-Anonymous
“Separated by eight thousand miles of ocean, as a pandemic raged, my new friend and I forged a bond over our mutual love of Taylor Swift.”
-Laila Samuel
“Zombies are killing me.”
-Dhalia Brelsford
“As my first cousin once-removed, Paul really goes above and beyond with the ‘removed’ bit.”
-Anonymous
“Orphanage · noun, a residential institution for the care and education of orphans.”
-KC Chustecki
“The New York Times hailed it as ‘the coming-of-age of an entire culture.’”
-Arin Bhandari
“Season 7, Episode 17 of Grey’s Anatomy changed my life.”
-Anonymous
“Click.”
-Anonymous
“‘To be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else, means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting.’ -E.E. Cummings.”
-Lera Strickland
“Being called ‘The Mom’ in elementary school was an insult.”
-Anonymous
“At heart, I am a storyteller.”
-Teddy Johnson
“Music is my means of communication and comprehension: I speak and hear through its voice and ears, letting new people and adventures add notes to the song of my life.”
-Malcolm Edusa
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